from john 6
Broken and shared on the
mountain,
the boy’s bread and fish
did not end
till all who were foll’wing
feasted.
a boy’s 5 loaves and 3
fishes.
Hungry and thirsty they
listened,
Broken and shared on the
mountain
was bread unexpectedly
giv’n,
words unexpectedly
bitter.
Manna supplied in the
desert
like Jesus supplying
their need.
Broken and shared on the
mountain
-they could not face
this allusion.
Many then fled from the spectre
of Joseph’s son somehow
their food.
Finally even the 12 left
him
broken and shared on the
mountain.
(from Wednesday)
quaterns:
4 verses, 4 lines, each line 8 beats
the first line slips down a line each verse till it is the last line in the final verse
no rhyme schemes
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